All the crit on my previous w.i.p actually really help me! Thanks guys! Here's take two of my walkcycle. I straighten the left arm and shifted his pelvis more towards that side. Hopefully this will show that he is carrying some weight on his left side. What do you guys think? Also straighten up his poster so that he doesn't look like he's crouching like justin mentioned. Please continue to rip this apart! cause it dose really help me!
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Looks SO much better man.
ReplyDeleteI feel that his feet are still lifting too high off the ground. It'd be more like dragging his feet, but you don't have to go that far. Also you don't need to rotate the foot upwards that much, like walking on a wooden floor and trying to avoid creaking sounds.
Right after he steps with his right foot, the cycle halts suddenly, so that's a minor thing, just gotta keep it moving.
Other than that I think it's solid!
Just spotted something minor, it's more of a polish thing. If you look at the gun barrel, it's moving all over the place, should try to keep it more still .
ReplyDeleteGood call Jeffrey on the barrel. Those things are heavy.Try put some angle on the shoulder.
ReplyDeleteSomething I might try is using the IK mode on his left arm and a locator in the tip of the barrel. Then, constraint the IK control to the locator. That way the locator would give more the look of a "drag"