At the beginning when she raises her right hand, you could really tuck her elbow in even more. After acting it out, the palm should probably face more screen-right, so a simple rotate will do. Should be fine if it's just a 3/4 view of the hand.
The "step forward" part is still a problem. Just make sure his upper body isn't moving backwards as the arms go down. He's kinda doing a Hawaiian dance right now. :)
Aside from that, looks good!
Oops, i just thought of something new, that I didn't see before. At the beginning, from crossed arms to the next pose, there's another way to make the transition. You have a pretty smooth transition, literally. If you made it so that she was surprised and quickly panicked into the next pose, that would be nice I think. It would show that she wasn't prepared for that SOMETHING to happen to the car, so she kind of just.. reacts!
Nice man. The ending part is much better.
ReplyDeleteAt the beginning when she raises her right hand, you could really tuck her elbow in even more. After acting it out, the palm should probably face more screen-right, so a simple rotate will do. Should be fine if it's just a 3/4 view of the hand.
The "step forward" part is still a problem. Just make sure his upper body isn't moving backwards as the arms go down. He's kinda doing a Hawaiian dance right now. :)
Aside from that, looks good!
Oops, i just thought of something new, that I didn't see before. At the beginning, from crossed arms to the next pose, there's another way to make the transition. You have a pretty smooth transition, literally. If you made it so that she was surprised and quickly panicked into the next pose, that would be nice I think. It would show that she wasn't prepared for that SOMETHING to happen to the car, so she kind of just.. reacts!
There you go :)
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i mean... Stay , not stayed.
ReplyDeleteNice voice action.
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