Looking good, I especially like the 'step forward' part.
This can be a lot more interesting by showing build-up. For example, she could start off with her arms crossed, in a very relaxed standing position, even facing away from Abe. She could drop her arms when she speaks the 2nd time, and turn towards Abe. Raise arms halfway with fists clenched on 3rd. On the 4th I think it's good with what you have. The point is to build up the power, (don't think Vegeta), so you'd want smaller/gentler movements to larger/firmer movements (don't think sexual). So with this scenario, the first time she speaks she would be concerned and wants to tell him to do something about it, but expects him to do it. Only after that, when noticing Abe not doing anything, does she begin to get concerned, which is why her stance would change to something less relaxed.
Anyway, there's some food for thought, a bit mishmash but I hope you get what I'm trying to say. Keep it going!
Looking good, I especially like the 'step forward' part.
ReplyDeleteThis can be a lot more interesting by showing build-up. For example, she could start off with her arms crossed, in a very relaxed standing position, even facing away from Abe. She could drop her arms when she speaks the 2nd time, and turn towards Abe. Raise arms halfway with fists clenched on 3rd. On the 4th I think it's good with what you have. The point is to build up the power, (don't think Vegeta), so you'd want smaller/gentler movements to larger/firmer movements (don't think sexual). So with this scenario, the first time she speaks she would be concerned and wants to tell him to do something about it, but expects him to do it. Only after that, when noticing Abe not doing anything, does she begin to get concerned, which is why her stance would change to something less relaxed.
Anyway, there's some food for thought, a bit mishmash but I hope you get what I'm trying to say. Keep it going!